Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, the activity that should superstars show their personal

life

have

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become

discussion

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. Open

the

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apply

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private

life

can cause harmful problems

to

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stars.

Firstly

, it will lead to negative effects,

troublesome

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and troublesome

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situation

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situations

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.

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, the idol

pray

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for evil

religion

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religions

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like satan can destroy their fame and become a topic for viewers to debate. Even, the consequences can be more serious like stars

got

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thief or

physically

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impacts.

Secondly

, it will influence the personal image of famous people.

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, a monk recorded

the

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video of the process of walking through the country and earning money from citizens but

this

monk used money for drugs and debauch activity can destroy the image of monks

by

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an extremely

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extremely

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way.

Next,

the family of idols will be chased by

paparazis

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paparazzi

and it can cause some

problem

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problems

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which is not

worth

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.

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,

mom

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the mom

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of Foden the famous

footballers

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footballer

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was

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damaged by

group

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a group

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of

crime

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criminals

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.

On the other hand

, the audience can be affected by

consequences

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the consequences

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of

this

activity. The viewers who just want to relax by listening to music but gain the negative things inadvertently.

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, it

waste

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wastes

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time and energy like the

audiences

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can use

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for

work

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out,

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, take care of

family

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their family

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instead

of

see

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seeing

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and

debate

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about

private

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the private

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life

of famous people on the internet to gain a lot of harmful thinking.

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, a group

fans

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of fans

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of idol Phanh

ne

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wasted their time

for debate

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with the keyboard hero on the media In conclusion,

personal

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the personal

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life

of idols or anyone

need

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to be respected and protected by the policies of

government

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the government

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.