IETLS Writing Test - The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
theft
per 1,000 Fix the agreement mistake
thefts
vehicles
in Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada, from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, it is apparent that the UK had the highest numbers
of stolen Fix the agreement mistake
number
vehicles
among all other countries, whilst both France and Canada had the lowest. Sweden had a relatively low number of thefts
at the start, but it grew during the decade.
Regarding Britain, they started the period
with around 17 thefts
per 1,000 vehicles
, and the line peaked at 20 thefts
in 1993, then
dipped at
16 Change preposition
to
thefts
in the next year. Afterwards
it hit the same peak in 1997 and ended the given Add a comma
Afterwards,
period
with the same dip at just 16 thefts
. Sweden began with considerably low theft rates at 8, then
the line increased gradually over the years till it reached the highest at 14 thefts
at the end
of the period
given.
On the other hand
, the figure shows that both France
and Change noun form
France's
Canada
Change noun form
Canada's
thefts
rates remained relatively the same over the given years, Change the noun form
theft
initially
with around 6 and 7 thefts
respectively and both ended the period
with 6 thefts
per thousand vehicles
.Submitted by remasalotaibi678 on
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Vocabulary: The word "dipped" was used 2 times.
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