With increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays
oil
and
gas
are the major
non-renewable
sources
of energy.
Although
a significant part of the world continues to share the idea that these
kind
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of
sources
are the ones which we should invest
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, there is a
likewise
large part which carries on a different idea. Indeed, in the present
day
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many renewable
sources
of energy have been studied for decades.
This
essay will address some of the reasons why renewable
sources
are preferable, and balance them with the opposite position, in order to illustrate the disadvantages of an
economy
based on
oil
and
gas
. To start with,
non-renewable
energy
sources
,
such
as
oil
and
gas
, are responsible for many environmental problems.
Above all
, climate change is the perfect example. Many studies
demonstate
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demonstrate
the link between the increase in the use of petroleum and global warming.
Moreover
, their production processes represent a huge cost, allowing only
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people to become very wealthy, to the detriment of the
overall
economy
of a country.
Nevertheless
, one might argue that
oil
and
gas
are still more efficient
sources
,
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because they do not depend on external conditions,
such
as the weather, which are out of human control.
Therefore
, to open up undiscovered areas of the world seeking more of these resources is at least a debatable decision.
However
, even if we would admit that
non-renewable
sources
are more efficient and easier to produce than renewable ones, they will
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sooner or later.
Additionally
, the costs in
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of environmental print will never be justified. In conclusion,
this
essay deals with
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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and possible advantages
to
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an
economy
based on
oil
and
gas
. Anyhow, it is evident that
such
an
economy
would not be sustainable.
For
this
reason, I
competely
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completely
disagree with the potential investment of money in the research of undiscovered areas for the extraction of
non-renewable
sources
.
Instead
, I encourage investments
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improving clean-power research.
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Ensure to stay on topic, directly addressing the prompt without deviating too much into broader discussions of renewable energy. For example, emphasize why exploring undiscovered areas may or may not be beneficial, with specifics.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
  • dependency
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