The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world
the charts illustrate the percentage of used
water
in 3 sectors
, relevant to humans, in 6 different countries from
the world.
Change preposition
around
Overall
, there are 3 sectors
of water
use
for human activities, consisting of Industrial, Agriculture and Domestic use
. Agriculture is the highest used in those different 6 areas, while
Domestic is the lowest water
use
in every single area.
The amount of water
used in 3 sectors
from 6 countries, Agriculture was the highest percentage. Especially in Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
use
water
for 84 per cent
, 88 per cent
, 81 per cent
and 71 per cent
.
Also
, It is obvious
saw that Domestic is the lowest Add an article
an obvious
the obvious
water
use
compared to other
two Correct article usage
the other
sectors
. In 6 different areas are used Domestic only 7 per cent
to 19 per cent
. besides
that, Industrial are one of the sectors
that depend on the country it has per cent
from 5 per cent
until 53 per cent
.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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