The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the just over 5000 and
amount
of shops
that closed and opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, both of
opened and closed Change preposition
apply
shops
amount
decreased given
the period and both of Change preposition
during
figures
Correct article usage
the figures
seen
fluctuated. Verb problem
apply
However
, opened
Correct article usage
the opened
shops
amount
sharply fell compared to closed Verb problem
apply
shops
, approximately 5500 shops
.
Closed shops
amount
initially
began 6500
and Change preposition
at 6500
this
figure peaked in 2013 just
over 7000. After that, in 2015 closed Change preposition
at just
shops
hit a low of, under the
1000. In 2016, there was a significant Change the article
apply
rose
Replace the word
rise
about
closed Change preposition
in
shops
, this
figure increasedChange preposition
by
last
three years amount
of closed shop
Fix the agreement mistake
shops
seen plateou
.
Verb problem
has decreased
On the other hand
, opened shops
amount
start with 8500 and this
was a peaked amount
. In 2012 opened closed amount
contributed 4000 and from 2012 to 2014 this
amount
gradually increased and reached just over 6000. In 20115, opened
Verb problem
the number of
shops
amount
declined and reached exact
figure in 2012, which is 4000. From 2015 to 2017 opened Add an article
the exact
shops
remain
steady and final year Wrong verb form
remained
amount
of opened shops
decreased from 4000 to 3000.Submitted by berivan_yilmazz on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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