Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be played more than entertainment and sports celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

Doctors

,

nurses

and

teachers

make a great contribution to

society

and should be played more than entertainment and sports celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

Doctors

,

nurses

and

teachers

play an important role

for

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smooth-running

society

so

according to

some their salary structure should be

high

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than entertainment and sports industries. In my opinion, I agree that healthcare people and professors ought to be more paid as it will greatly benefit both individuals and

society

. A beneficial reason to pay more to

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doctors

and

nurses

is that they help people to fight against their pain and medical conditions. At present, individuals need doctor’s support to understand the problem and to

leave

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a healthy lifestyle with their family. Higher pay will improve

doctor’s

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confidence as they work more time in

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emergency

situation

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to treat their patients and

to

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save their

life

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lives

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.

Furthermore

,

Nurses

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also

deserved

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to be a part of high income because they support

doctors

in stressful

situation

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like medical surgeries. Another point to consider is that

teachers

should

also

be paid more because they are responsible for children’s growth and development.

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,

teachers

teach discipline to the child to be a good person in

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society

and

also

give academic knowledge which

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to develop their personality. By paying more to the

teachers

, they will focus more on their work and support their students in any difficult challenges they might face in their

life

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.

As a result

, children will become

more

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responsible person for the

society

and the family. In conclusion, more payment to

doctors

,

nurses

and

teachers

is worth for

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society

and human beings than entertainment and sports celebrities. By doing

this

, it will help to improve their confidence and motivation to work hard for

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society

.