Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?
To acquire cultural
knowledge
is extremely important so many people
believe that an individual can never gain this
without speaking the specific language
. However
, in my opinion, I disagree that speaking the local language
is important as it only requires a person’s interest and observational skills.
To begin
with, people
do not need to speak the
native Change the word
their
language
to know about culture because they can read digital books according to
their time. These books can give knowledge
about entire history in detail and also
one can learn about cultural heritage in their own language
. Due to
the latest technology, there are many digital books available online related to different countries
customs and norms. Change noun form
countries'
country's
For example
, ‘Indian
Independent History’ book is available online in various languages, Correct article usage
the ‘Indian
therefore
, anyone can know about Indian history without knowing Hindi
Change the article
the Hindi
language
. Thus
, people
can travel any where
in the Join the words
anywhere
word
and acquire Correct your spelling
world
knowledge
about the different cultures of a country.
Another point to consider is that people
can visit tourist attractions to know
about the culture of a nation. Verb problem
learn
In other words
, many places have tour guides who can speak national
Add an article
the national
language
, people
can go there and ask anything they want to know about past
or just Correct article usage
the past
can
observe the place to understand different activities like local dances or festivals. Verb problem
apply
For instance
, one of the famous tourist attractions, Niagara falls
in Canada has a written history about the place on numerous rocks, Capitalize word
Falls
therefore
, individual
do not need to learn their local Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
language
French
.
In conclusion, having cultural Add the comma(s)
, French
knowledge
is important but it is not necessary to vocalize the language
. The important consideration in learning about other country’s cultures is to have an interest and observation skills.Submitted by parmarheena277254 on
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general
Your essay presents a clear stance and provides relevant examples to support your arguments. However, make sure to proofread for minor grammatical errors and improve the clarity of some sentences.
introduction
In the first paragraph, you introduce your opinion clearly but try to make it slightly more concise.
coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, consider using more transitional phrases to link your ideas even more seamlessly.
task achievement
In the second main body paragraph, ensure all examples directly support the point you're making. The example of Niagara falls could be linked more explicitly to understanding culture.
conclusion
Your conclusion effectively reiterates your main point without simply repeating the introduction.
task achievement
You provide a well-rounded response that addresses the prompt effectively.
examples
The examples you used are relevant and help to illustrate your points.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.