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The table shows forested land in million of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in million of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about the
forest
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area
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 in six various parts of the world in three
years
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. Units are measured in
million
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millions
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 of hectares.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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both
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in both
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 Africa and South
America
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 forested
land
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 declined over the
years
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given
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whereas
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those
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 in Europe increased;
moreover
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,
forest
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area
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 in both North
America
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 and Oceania mainly stayed consistent in the given
years
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.
According to
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 the data,
at
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in
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 the final
year
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year,
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 Europe had the largest forested
land
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 compared to Oceania with the smallest. In regard to decreased forested
land
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, in Africa it started in 1990 with 749 and dropped gradually to 691 in 2005;
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, in South
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America
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America,
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 it was 946 in 1990 and progressively fell to 882 in 2005.
On the other hand
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, the
forest
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area
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 in Europe began with 989 in 1990 and grew significantly to 1001 in 2005 being the largest out of all the named locations. Turning to the remaining, forested
area
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 in both North
America
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 and Oceania remained relatively the same in all three
years
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 but with minor declines and
at
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in
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 the
last
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 year the
land
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 was at around 705 and 197 respectively.
Likewise
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, Asia's
forest
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area
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 showed fluctuations through the given
years
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 and was 584 in the
last
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 year.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, area, years, america, land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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