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era, a number of
people
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turn to traditional
medicine
. In my opinion,
this
is
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development which can lead to lack of
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some traditional
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.
One serious problem that can arise from
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traditional
medicine
is that it can lead to
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infected again with the same disease.
In other words
, since there is no medical insurance the probability of getting the disease again is 100%,
for instance
, bone fractures, using physical therapy to treat
this
leads to getting infected again because they do not heal completely.
furthermore
, There is no full responsibility in traditional
treatment
when the injury returns again, as in modern medical
treatment
which puts the lives of
people
who use traditional medicines at risk.
Another issue is that difficult to get some traditional
medicine
and its risk. To put it simply,With the advancement of
medicine
,
people
are no longer interested in natural remedies, which has led to their disappearance more quickly.Thousands of years ago,
people
would travel long distances to search for rare plants,
for example
,
whereas
now it has become easier to get
treatment
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medical development,
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We conclude from
this
that searching for traditional
treatment
is risky and that the difficulty of obtaining it is greater than the benefit of using it.
In conclusion,
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the development in medical
treatment
, some
people
still use traditional
treatment
without considering its negatives and harms.