Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people often think that

competition

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in daily, professional and school

life

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is a good thing,

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, some believe that, sometimes we should try to cooperate more rather than competing against each other. Let's have a look at both of these views and reach a concrete decision.

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with,

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think challenges in workplaces and in our normal

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is

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an effective thing. Because

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the benefits we get

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on how much

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hard work

we do.

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, if a

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who is running a small business

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another

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as his competitor, and he wants to conquer him, he

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his nose to the grindstone.

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,

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think

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between young children is not beneficial for them. Because

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it can fall their confidence and they might think

theirselves

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themselves

as losers. So, it depends

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which

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stage

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of

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the

competitions

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is necessary.

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, yes,

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agree with

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statement that sometimes we need cooperation in comparison to

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competition

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with another

person

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.

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, the reason behind

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logic is that

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every

person

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has strengths and weaknesses. As an example, we consider one

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as our competitor, because he might be good in algebra.

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, we should think that, if that particular

person

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is good at that specific thing,

then

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am

also

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professional in

computer

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or some other things that he might be not. From my perspective, every individual is someone's ideal, so,

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completely agree with

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view. In conclusion,

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think

competition

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is not effective at every stage of

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, especially in kids in schools where they need to become confident.

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, in some points of

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, we should try to cooperate with others especially with our seniors or juniors, rather than competing with them.