Yoga exercise practice, What shall we do? How do you feel about?

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Intro Welcome to class, today is going to be a
yin style
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practice
, so we're doing three or four yin poses which we will hold for about three minutes each and
then
we will finish up with some gentle breath works. So
this
is not a strong
practice
.
This
is not necessarily energizing.
This
is more grounding relaxing and a super peaceful
practice
. So if you want to get comfortable with a hoodie or a blanket or any props pillows bolsters whatever you need for
this
class or you might want to use for
this
practice
feel free to grab that. Now, we will
then
begin our
practice
today, on our
back
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in kind of a reclined butterfly, so find your way onto your back. Bring the feet together. And, if you want to put a bolster or so underneath your back feel free to do so. I would just lay straight on my back so it's more like a
supta
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supra
baddhakonasana, like a shavasana on the back with the feet together so
this
is our
practice
to let go. It's
also
a quick
practice
today so
lets
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let go. We are easing into the poses. We're giving ourselves time to melt
breathe
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arrive. Feel free to close your eyes. I will
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talk slower and talk a little bit less and give you some more space for silence
and
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introspection and going deeper into your heart. Let the knees fall open, the legs fall open like a book, the arms are alongside your body. Close your eyes if they're not already and breathe about 30 more seconds here. So two or three nice slow deep breaths As the body starts to open up and relax and
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go of that tension. It's the invitation and opportunity to focus more on the breath,
notice
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and notice
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the air flow coming in and out through the nose. Use your hands to help your legs come back together. You can hug the knees into the chest, give yourself a nice hug and
then
rock forward, come up to a seat,
take
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your time no rush.
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task achievement
To improve task response, consider providing more specific instructions regarding each pose and its benefit. This will help in delivering a complete and comprehensive guide to the practice.
coherence cohesion
For better coherence and cohesion, ensuring smoother transitions between the steps and adding linking words could make the flow more seamless.
task achievement
The introduction effectively sets the tone of the yoga class, outlining the style of practice and setting expectations.
coherence cohesion
The essay maintains a comfortable, guided and introspective tone, which is highly appropriate for the context of a yoga session.

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