“Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.”

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the current time, there are several environmental

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which pose a threat to the

ecosystem

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. Some argue that the main environmental problem is

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loss

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of particular

species

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of plants and animals,

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others say that there may be other

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that are more important.

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, I would agree that there are other factors that are more urgent than the extinction of some organisms. On one hand, the

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of some

species

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of animals and plants is most definitely important, as the

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of a

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can tip the balance of the

ecosystem

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.

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, why some say that it should be a main priority to preserve these endangered

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. Another reason may be caused by the fact that these particular organisms are part of

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crucial scientific research. If they were extinct,

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they would not be able to do their work

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and make scientific discoveries that may help the human population,

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as vaccines and medicine.

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, there are several other environmental

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that are

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of urgent concern.

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, pollution and

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are

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that need to be solved. Pollution and

climate

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change

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the

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ecosystem

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. Without proper waste management and

climate

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actions, habitat

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is inevitable, which leads to the

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of organisms.

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means that it directly affects the

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, which can pose a threat to them if not dealt with immediately.

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, there are other pressing matters that should be immediately dealt with;

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, pollution and

climate

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change, as they contribute to the

loss

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of habitat which directly affects the

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of

species

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.