The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 

according to United Nations statistics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
birth
and
death
rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020,
according to
United Nations statistics. In the early period from 1975 to 1995, the
birth
rate
remained consistently higher than the
death
rate
, with both experiencing a gradual increase. In 1975, the
birth
rate
was approximately 1.2
million
,
while
the
death
rate
was slightly below 1
million
. By 1995, the
birth
rate
had risen to around 1.7
million
,
while
the
death
rate
increased more modestly to about 1.4
million
.
However
, the trend shifts significantly from 2005 onwards. The
birth
rate
experiences
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a notable surge, reaching around 3
million
in 2005 and maintaining
this
high level into 2015 and 2025. Meanwhile, the
death
rate
shows a more gradual increase, reaching just over 1.5
million
by 2025.
Overall
, the chart reveals a significant increase in both
birth
and
death
rates over the 50-year period, with the
birth
rate
consistently surpassing the
death
rate
, particularly after 2005.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, death, rate, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • death rate
  • fluctuation
  • demographic
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • incremental
  • statistical
  • longitudinal
  • population growth
  • life expectancy
  • fertility rate
  • mortality rate
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
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