The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the comparison between the actual and
target
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punctuality
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rates of buses from 1999 to 2003 and depict the number of
passenger
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complaints during the same period.
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, it is evident that the
target
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performance for bus
punctuality
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declined gradually over the years,
while
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the actual performance experienced fluctuations but eventually nearly matched the
target
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rate
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in 2003. Meanwhile, the number of
passenger
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complaints showed a steady upward trend throughout the five-year period. In 1999, the actual
punctuality
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rate
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was close to the
target
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, with both hovering around 80%.
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, in 2000, the actual
rate
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dropped significantly to approximately 30%,
whereas
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the
target
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rate
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remained stable at around 40%. The years 2001 and 2002 saw the actual performance stagnate at just below 40%, closely aligning with the
target
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. Remarkably, in 2003, the actual
punctuality
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rate
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surged back to nearly 78%, creating the largest discrepancy between the actual and
target
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rates over the entire period. Simultaneously, the number of
passenger
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complaints increased consistently from 60 in 1999 to 120 in 2003, doubling over the five years.
This
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suggests a correlation between the fluctuations in bus
punctuality
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and the rise in
passenger
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dissatisfaction.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words target, punctuality, passenger, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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