The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two pie charts illustrate the comparison of
income
sources
and outcome
sources
of charity for kids in the USA in one year.
Overall
, donated food is the most significant
income
source, whilst
program
services have the biggest proportion of the expenses of a children's charity in the USA. There are major gaps between the first and the second biggest
sources
for both two categories. In the first figure, donated food has the biggest amount of revenue
sources
with 86.6%, whilst the nearest source is community contributions with only 10.4%. These
sources
are followed by
Program
revenue and other
income
with 2.2% and 0.4% respectively. Investment
income
and government grants have the same proportions which are 0.2% each. The second chart shows that expenditure is divided into 3 groups,
such
as
program
services, fundraising, and management and general. The expenses for management
and
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general, and fundraising are only 4.2% in total, whilst 95.8% of the money is spent on
program
services. There is almost a
3million
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3 million
dollar difference between the incomes and outcomes of the charity.
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