The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
The given two pie charts compare the marital status of two countries, which are
Canada
and
Australia
, broken down into six categories for
Canada
and five for
Australia
. As can be seen from the pie charts, the majority of
people
were separated but not divorced in
Canada
,
similarly
, nearly half of the population were married in
Australia
.
In contrast
, the percentages for single
people
, widowed and divorced were similar.
However
,
same sex
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marriage existed only in
Canada
. It is evident that there were more separated but not divorced
people
in
Canada
than in
Australia
, by 53% and 41%, respectively.
However
, the number of married couples was higher in
Australia
than in
Canada
by 17%.
In contrast
, the percentages of single
people
, widowed and divorced were very close, their discrepancy was only 1%.
Besides
, it is interesting to note that there is a 3% of
same sex
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marriage population in
Canada
but it was not categorized in
Australia
.
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