The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1975 to 2025 according to United Nations statistics.

The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1975 to 2025 according to United Nations statistics.
The graph illustrates data about how
much
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birth
and
death
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deaths
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occured
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occurred
in Switzerland based on the figures
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UN
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between 1975 to 2020.
Overall
,
although
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of
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birth
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births
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experienced a dramatic rise, despite remaining stable at the
begining
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beginning
, the
numbers
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number
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of
death
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deaths
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decreased, considering a peak, over the fifty years. It is noticeable that, the greatest
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difference
in
number
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of
birth
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births
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and
death
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deaths
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happend
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happened
happen
in 2025. From 1975 to 1995, the figure for
new born
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newborn
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rose gradually from 1.3 to 1.7
millions
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million
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, despite staying constant at 1.3
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in the first decade, but the rate of
death
saw a decrease from one to 1.5
millions
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.
Furthermore
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birth
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in the lowest numbers nearly 1.3. In the years 1995 to 2020, the statistics of
birth
jumped from 1.7 to over 2.5
millions
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, growing gradually to 3.3 in two
decade
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later
similarly
the rate of
death
have
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fallen to 75 thousand people in 2020. The most
stastics
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statistics
of
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death
and the lowest figure
of
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birth
acoounted
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accounted
for 0.75 and 3.3
millions
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in the
last
year, respectively.
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