The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and chart illustrate the police budget between 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.
Overall
, there is a great difference in terms of
salaries
,
technology
, building and
transport
. In 2017 the total
of
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police budget came from the national government, local taxes and other sources was 304.7 million pounds. The
money
spent on
salaries
was 75%, and the
money
they spent on
technology
is
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decreased sharply to become 8%, and
then
the
money
they spent on building and
transport
was 17%. As can be seen, in 2018 the total
of
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police budget came from the national government, local taxes, building and
transport
was increased dramatically to reach 318.6 million pounds. They spent the
money
in
salaries
around 69% which is less than what they spent in 2017, and they spent around 17% on
technology
, and
then
in building and
transport
they spent around 17% which has remained stable with
last
year. From an
overall
perspective, it is obvious that there are several differences between
salaries
,
technology
, building and
transport
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, technology, transport, money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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