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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the average
rainfall
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 that occurs
in
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every month in Woodsville and
Blacksboro
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Blacksburg
.
Overall
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, in Woodsville, it
rains
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 heavily in the month of November,
whereas
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 in Blacksboro there is maximum
rainfall
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 in February. In November, it
rains
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 most in Woodsville (6
inches
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),
while
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 the least
rainfall
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 in
this
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 city occurs in July (0.7) and August (2).
Moreover
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, in the months of April, May, June, October, and September, it
rains
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 from 7–3
inches
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 respectively.
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, the rain in January, February, March, and December is from 3–5.5
inches
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.
In contrast
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, it
rains
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 significantly heavily (4
inches
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) in February,
whereas
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 their
rainfall
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 ranges from 7–3
inches
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 in January, March, April, November, and December respectively.
Furthermore
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, May, June, July, August, September, and October are the only months in the table where it is below 1
inche
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inches
inch
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, rains, inches with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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