The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts the average
rainfall
that occurs
in
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every month in Woodsville and
Blacksboro
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Blacksburg
.
Overall
, in Woodsville, it
rains
heavily in the month of November,
whereas
in Blacksboro there is maximum
rainfall
in February. In November, it
rains
most in Woodsville (6
inches
),
while
the least
rainfall
in
this
city occurs in July (0.7) and August (2).
Moreover
, in the months of April, May, June, October, and September, it
rains
from 7–3
inches
respectively.
However
, the rain in January, February, March, and December is from 3–5.5
inches
.
In contrast
, it
rains
significantly heavily (4
inches
) in February,
whereas
their
rainfall
ranges from 7–3
inches
in January, March, April, November, and December respectively.
Furthermore
, May, June, July, August, September, and October are the only months in the table where it is below 1
inche
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inches
inch
.
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