Describe how is your elementary school looks like?
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school
is one of the Use synonyms
base
educations we have as we were a child. There are two types of elementary Correct word choice
basic
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school
, those are Public Fix the agreement mistake
schools
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School
and Private Fix the agreement mistake
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school
. Personally, I Fix the agreement mistake
schools
was
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was studying
study
in Use synonyms
Private
elementary Correct article usage
a Private
school
which was located in Yogyakarta, Indonesia. It was called SD Kanisius, the Use synonyms
school
was a catholic-based education Use synonyms
school
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most of the Correct word choice
and
students
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are
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were
non-moslem
. The Correct your spelling
non-Muslim
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contains 6 classes only with each class defined Use synonyms
each
grade in Change preposition
as each
Elementary
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the Elementary
School
education system, Use synonyms
for
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instance
let’s say it is “Class 1” so the class belongs to the first grader and so on.
Just like any other Add a comma
instance,
school
across the country, in Indonesia we have our own education culture system like Use synonyms
uniform
, Use synonyms
way
of Use synonyms
study
, rules, etc. Use synonyms
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uniform
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we used to have Use synonyms
varies
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various
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apply
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uniform
for each day of the week, on Monday we used to wear Fix the agreement mistake
uniforms
red
and white Add an article
a red
the red
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uniform
with Fix the agreement mistake
uniforms
red
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a red
the red
tie
, where the pants Fix the agreement mistake
ties
was
red and the shirt was white. On Tuesday and Change the verb form
were
Wednesday
we wore a special Add a comma
Wednesday,
uniform
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school
, the shirt was white but the pants Use synonyms
was
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were
with
triangle shapes yellow Change preposition
apply
colored
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coloured
yellow
bow tie, Correct article usage
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moreover
on Thursday we wore scout Add a comma
moreover,
uniform
and Friday we wore Use synonyms
School
’s Batik and on Saturday we had a sport Use synonyms
activites
so we wore our Correct your spelling
activities
sport
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sports
uniform
.
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way
of Add an article
a way
the way
study
, I Use synonyms
believed
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favorite
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favourite
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at least one despite of lot of subjects Use synonyms
were
given to Wrong verb form
being
students
. For me personally, I love Use synonyms
Mathematics
for me solving a numerical problem Use synonyms
its
so exciting and convenient to do because for me to solve a real-time problem is more sensible than you have to guessing about the problem with Correct your spelling
is
what if
questions. Add a hyphen
what-if
Moreover
, we can Linking Words
implemented
math in real life Change the verb form
implement
such
as when Linking Words
you
count the money Correct pronoun usage
we
you
have right now or when Correct pronoun usage
we
you
want to summarize Correct pronoun usage
we
your
work with Correct pronoun usage
our
lot
of numerical problems, and our life basically contains math in every single thing we do, Change the article
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instance
when we are on our Add a comma
instance,
way
to our place destination we can count the times to arrives. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, subjects in Linking Words
school
will not be fun and Use synonyms
interested
for Replace the word
interesting
students
to Use synonyms
study
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on
if the teachers are not friendly enough to their Change preposition
apply
students
, in Use synonyms
this
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case
my Add the comma(s)
case,
favorite
teacher was Mam Ria, she was my math teacher she taught me Change the spelling
favourite
mathematics
in a fun and easy to learn Use synonyms
way
which made me eager to learn more about Use synonyms
mathematics
she taught and said to me that Use synonyms
mathematics
is easy to learn if Use synonyms
youre
willing to learn about it, so I sum up that when it comes to learning its all about mindset.Correct your spelling
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