The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree

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workers

require

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to obtain more long

weekend

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and the working week must be deducted. In my point of view,

i

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obviously agree with the essay because sometimes

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employers do not follow the regulation and

policy

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policies

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from

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government

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the government

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and they need to put their attention

about

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the mental awareness of

employees

when they want to

adding

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more working hours. It is crystal clear that

,

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the

company

need to follow the

regulation

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regulations

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for working

hour

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hours

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for

workers

. But, in common

case

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,

their

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use the weakness of employee contracts to put overtime

works

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without adding the income for

workers

.

As a result

, people who work for that

company

do not have time to enjoy their

weekend

holiday.

For instance

, in my country, sometimes the private

company

do not follow the policy that the

employees

have 6 to 8 hours

for

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work each day.

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, if the

employees

just have

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slightly

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weekend

, it will affect

to

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their mental illness. I believe that

,

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the

company

need to

put

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more attention

about

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this

topic because it is not only for the health benefits for the

workers

but

also

for the

company

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growth.

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, in recent times, several companies have

program

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programs

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to

gathering

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with whole

of

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employees

in

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the

weekend

. So, it is a really great idea to build

relationship

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each

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other. Beside

ot

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of

that, the advancement of technology

are

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of paramount importance to reduce work hours for several

position

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of occupations

such

as content

creator

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creators

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, engineers and various jobs with use

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Artificial

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Intelligence and

the

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access

of

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the internet. In conclusion,

i

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agree that the working week

need

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to more

short

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and the

employees

need to have

more long

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longer

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weekend

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weekends

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.

Consequently

, both the

workers

and the employers have benefits for themselves.