There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages as a form of assessment?
There seemed like an
increase
trend towards testing young adults through exams rather than continual assessments. Replace the word
increased
This
essay believes that some of the advantages are that students
might have less stress
in grades
and there might be more time for art classes. However
, some of the disadvantages are that many students
might end up
the year with low Change preposition
apply
grades
, and they might forget the point to go attending school.
One of the advantages is that many students
might have less stress
because they are not going to think about grades
, so they might learn to pay attention without thinking about failing. Firstly
, if they have less stress
, they might end it
up feeling Correct pronoun usage
apply
happiness
about going to school and Replace the word
happy
learn
other great aspects Wrong verb form
learning
about
academic education. Another great aspect is that they might have more time for art classes, Change preposition
of
so
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apply
it
might lead to Correct pronoun usage
which
develop
cognitive skills and Change the verb form
developing
have
smarter kids. Wrong verb form
having
Besides
this
, if they desire learning how to plat
a musical instrument, they might become a professional artist in the near future. Not feeling Correct your spelling
play
stress
or pressure this
might help them to learn without feeling being Correct pronoun usage
apply
judge
. Wrong verb form
judged
For instance
, in China, the educational system is based of
not Change the preposition
on
grade
children until they reach high school, so these kids value Replace the word
grading
other aspect
Change the wording
another aspect
other aspects
in
Change preposition
of
live
like being happy, Replace the word
life
nature
and enjoy helping others.
One of the disadvantages Correct word choice
and nature
about
not Change preposition
of
continual
being Change the word
continually
assess
is that many of them might have low Wrong verb form
assessed
grades
at the end
of the year because they might forget the importance of being disciplined with their academic projects. Not studying every day might lead to forget
the importance of getting higher Change the verb form
forgetting
grades
such
as A
in all Change noun form
A's
the
subjects. If they have not been graded for too many months, they might Correct article usage
apply
loss
academic skills like being able to memorize hundreds of subjects for a class. Replace the word
lose
For instance
, In Mexico, the educations
system is tough Change the noun form
education
that
Correct word choice
and
students
are oral and written evaluated in all the classes in order to get a license.
In conclusion, there are many advantages of not assessing student
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students
continual
Change the word
continually
such
as avoid feeling
anxiety and look education in a more enjoyable way, Wrong verb form
avoiding
and
some of the drawbacks are that they might lose educational skills and forget the importance of being evaluated and have good Correct word choice
apply
grades
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