The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
The graph illustrates the average
growth
in domestic product in affluent nations, nations that have embraced a global business approach, and those that have not.
There are 2 opposing trends in the graph, where wealthy countries are experiencing a significant decline while
globalisers
are experiencing a fairly sharp increase.
In the 1960s rich countries experienced the highest Correct your spelling
globalised
globalists
growth
of domestic products, where the growth
rate almost reached 5 percent
. For 3 decades, there was a decline of more than half where
in 1960 there was only a Correct word choice
whereas
growth
of 2 percent
. On the opposite side, globalisers
actually experienced very large Correct your spelling
globalised
globalists
growth
from 1960 to 1990. in 1960 it was only 1.2 percent
but in 1990 the Change the spelling
per cent
growth
almost reached 5 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Non-globalisers
countries experienced Correct your spelling
Non-globaliser
growth
fluctuations for 3 decades,where the highest growth
occurred
in 1970.Wrong verb form
occurring
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