The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

The charts illustrate several reasons for adults to continue their

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and the cost allocation of their educational program.

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, the primary reason for adults deciding to

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is interest in subjects and the course should be shared to not only the individuals

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to the employers and

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as well. Looking at the bar chart, four out of ten adults opt to

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because

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interesting the subject is.

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, the second reason is to obtain some qualifications with 38% of them.

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, some people think continuing their

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will help their job and increase their opportunity to obtain promotion, with 22% and 20%, respectively. Meanwhile, even though each individual should pay

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education, 60% of all

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should be paid by other stakeholders,

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as employers and tax

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payers

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. Some people think the proportion will be 35% for the employers and the remaining for the

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.

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, the

invidiuals

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individuals

only pay their tuition fee by not more than 40 of

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cost.