The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the participation of
people
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in 4 different sports in the region between 1985 and 2005.
Overall
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,
popularity
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the popularity
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of different kinds of sports remained similar or increased gradually, except Rugby with the interest
to
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in
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it declined dramatically. Tennis was ranked second in terms of popularity in 1985 with the interest
of
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in
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the sport
increased
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gently over the years, as the sport
overtooked
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overlooked
overtook
Rugby in 1995 and peaked in 2005 with more than 210
people
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participated
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. With nearly 250
people
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participated
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participating
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, Rugby was a game with the most
people
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in the region
intrested
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interested
in 1985.
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, there was soon a stark decrease in the popularity of the sport at nearly 80%, to only 50 participants recorded in 2005. Over the period of 20 years, only slight
fluctuatuons
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fluctuations
were recorded in in terms of the amount of participation in badminton and basketball, both ranging
at
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from
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around 50 to 100
people
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they are some of the sports with
lowest
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the lowest
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participation in the region.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • participation rate
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • stable
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance
  • decline
  • steady growth
  • significant change
  • regional popularity
  • time period
  • sports activities
  • data representation
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