IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The
given
Verb problem
apply
show examples
pie chart illustrates the exportation in
millions
Use synonyms
 between
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
 and
Vietnam
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
, the highest
export
Use synonyms
 from
Vietnam
Use synonyms
 to
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
 is coffee and from the US to
Vietnam
Use synonyms
 is aircraft parts. The least
Use synonyms
export
Fix the agreement mistake
exports
show examples
 happening from
Vietnam
Use synonyms
 are garments and other goods and from
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
 it is cars.
Vietnam
Use synonyms
having
Wrong verb form
has
show examples
 its highest exports
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
 coffee resulting in $23
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
show examples
. Fruits and vegetables take the second position corresponding to exportation to
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
 taking
it
Correct pronoun usage
its
show examples
 number to $16
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
show examples
.
However
Linking Words
, Seafood taking third position resulting
only
Change preposition
in only
show examples
 in $4.4
Use synonyms
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
show examples
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
Use synonyms
export
Fix the agreement mistake
exports
show examples
 followed by rice which is at $4.2
Use synonyms
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
show examples
. The least
export
Use synonyms
 done by
Vietnam
Use synonyms
 is of garments and Other
good
Fix the agreement mistake
goods
show examples
 with a number of only 2
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
show examples
. For US exports to
Vietnam
Use synonyms
, Aircraft parts bring in substantially more money
Linking Words
then
Replace the word
than
show examples
 the other combined categories, with $72
million
Use synonyms
.
After
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
,
largest
Correct article usage
the largest
show examples
Use synonyms
export
Fix the agreement mistake
exports
show examples
 are Other and Machinery at $35
million
Use synonyms
 and 30.5
million
Use synonyms
 respectively. Fertiliser and cotton
also
Linking Words
exports
Change the verb form
export
show examples
 in
double digit
Add a hyphen
double-digit
show examples
 figure with 16.5
million
Use synonyms
 and 12
million
Use synonyms
. Cars provide the least benefit in exporting to
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
 with a
humber
Correct your spelling
number
 of $ 6
miilion
Correct your spelling
million
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, vietnam, export, million with synonyms.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • import/export balance
  • sector
  • percentage
  • relative importance
  • comparative analysis
  • similarities and differences
  • noteworthy
  • primary sector
  • secondary sector
  • contribute
  • overall export profile
  • main features
  • summarize
  • context
What to do next:
Look at other essays: