The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the stages of making sugar from sugar cane in seven steps. At first glance, it commences with growing the sweet cane and concludes with drying and cooling.
First,
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this
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sweet plant needs 12 -18 months for growth.
Second,
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harvest the ripe plant. Human resources or agricultural machines are used for harvesting canes. After that, in the third stage, the sweet canes are added to the crushing machine to make juice. Purifying juice is made of a limestone filter which has a funnel shape. Later, the evaporator which is like a huge oven and works with the heat of fire, makes syrup with the liquid that comes from the previous step.
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crystals are separated by the centrifuge from syrup.
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but not least, the crystals of the sweet and white sweetie are dried and cooled in an enormous tank.
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, the manufacturing process for making white blur sweet has been written before.
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, it seems there are just seven main steps in
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process.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Harvesting
  • Crushing/extraction
  • Purification
  • Boiling/evaporation
  • Crystallization
  • Centrifugation
  • Drying and cooling
  • Efficiency/yield
  • By-products
  • Waste management
  • Impurities
  • Sugar cane
  • Sugar crystals
  • Liquid removal
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