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The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California and in the rest of the world for residential, agricultural and industrial purposes

The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California and in the rest of the world for residential, agricultural and industrial purposes
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The data is shown as
pie
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a pie
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 chart which illustrates
water
 usage for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego, California and worldwide. The information shown in percentages and three graphs are given. At first glance, all
of
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the
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three charts
has
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 significant differences in
the
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water
 consumption. In San Diego County and in the rest of the world one of the reasons
are
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 dominant,
whereas
 in California
water
 consumption
allocated
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 approximately equally.
Usage
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 of
water
 for residential usage in San Diego is 60%, which most likely means that
this
 state
does
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 not known for its industry and agriculture.
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, in
this
area
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indusrtial
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industrial
 and agricultural
reosons
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reasons
consues
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consume
 23 and 17
percents
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percent
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 respectively. California state
distrubuted
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distributed
water
 roughly in equal amounts, but
also
 citizens have
slight
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a slight
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 advantage over other purposes. Worldwide agriculture has
prevalence
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a prevalence
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 over others for
water
 consumption, staying at almost 70%;
conversely
, citizens
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avarage
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average
 consumes only 8% of
water
. Indeed,
multitude
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a multitude
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 of people live in developed
contries
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countries
 where residents have a problem with
sufficiency
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the sufficiency
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 of
water
, and they mostly work in agricultural places that
provides
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 food for the rest of the world.
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