The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates how aluminium

cans

are recycled. Several major procedures are required before

those material

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that material

those materials

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can be reused.

Overall

, approximately 74 per cent of wasted

cans

metal

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of metal

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are eligible for reuse.

Initially

, empty

cans

will be collected regularly by rubbish trucks and shipped to recycling facilities.

Subsequently

, different types of

cans

will be cleaned and classified in a special machine, in order to sort out those which are available for recycling.

Then

this

machine will shred these qualified

cans

into pieces and compress them into rectangular squares.

This

step is required for efficient storage and

further

recycle

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recycling

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processes. The following procedure is heating, where those metal squares

were

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are

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melted into liquid form using a smelter. After that, heated aluminium will be cooled and reshaped into

sheet

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a sheet

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with 2.5 to 6

millimetre

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millimetres

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in depth. These slices are

then

rolled and

store

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stored

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as rolls. And now, raw

material

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materials

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will be stamped into

cans

for reusing.