The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of citizens who participated in four types of sports in one region from 1985 to 2005.
It is clear that
the number
of people
who joined basketball
activity was a downward trend while
tennis
shows an upward trend.
In 1985, the number
of citizens who participated in basketball
activity was the highest and was around 250 people
while
the figure
of
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for
tennis
was around 150 people
. In 1995, the figure
of
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for
basketball
slightly decreased to 200 people
at
the same range Change preposition
in
with
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as
people
who play tennis
which gradually increased. The number
of tennis
players reached over 200 people
. In contrast
, The figure
of
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for
basketball
dramatically declined after 1995 to 50 people
at the end
of the period and declined to the same point with
rugby.
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as
On the other hand
, the figure
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figures
of
badminton and rugby remained the same around 90 and 50 Change preposition
for
people
respectively. throughout the periods.Submitted by jeebjib14 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, basketball, tennis, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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