The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the way in which a biofuel called
ethanol
is created. Use synonyms
Overall
there are three main stages: harvesting plants and trees, creating cellulose, and adding microbes to sugars to produce Linking Words
ethanol
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In the first stage, plants and trees which have absorbed sunlight and carbon dioxide, are cut down and harvested by tractor. Use synonyms
Following
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, the fragments are sent to a pre-processing machine which creates strands of cellulose. Once the strands have been created, they are Linking Words
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processed with chemicals where they break down into sugars.
In terms of making Linking Words
ethanol
and CO2, as soon as the sugars from the processing stage have been formed, microbes are added in order to make Use synonyms
ethanol
on a large scale. Use synonyms
This
biofuel is Linking Words
then
ready to be used in cars, trucks, and aeroplanes, which in turn emits carbon dioxide and Linking Words
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then
goes back into the atmosphere where the process repeats itself.Linking Words
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