The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram illustrates the way in which a biofuel called
ethanol
is created.
Overall
there are three main stages: harvesting plants and trees, creating cellulose, and adding microbes to sugars to produce
ethanol
. In the first stage, plants and trees which have absorbed sunlight and carbon dioxide, are cut down and harvested by tractor.
Following
this
, the fragments are sent to a pre-processing machine which creates strands of cellulose. Once the strands have been created, they are
then
processed with chemicals where they break down into sugars. In terms of making
ethanol
and CO2, as soon as the sugars from the processing stage have been formed, microbes are added in order to make
ethanol
on a large scale.
This
biofuel is
then
ready to be used in cars, trucks, and aeroplanes, which in turn emits carbon dioxide and
this
then
goes back into the atmosphere where the process repeats itself.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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