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Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned.Discusd both views and give your opinion.

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Across the globe, some people depict leadership as a genetic fact,
while
 others frame it as an ability that can be acquired.
This
 essay will shed light on both sides and it will be framed through a gender perspective before giving an opinion. We might be driven by the concept that certain behaviours show an instinct
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 it is considered natural that men are the best in the decision-maker. For many
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 the patriarchal society has
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portrayed
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 figure as the only one
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 to face and manage difficulties. And if we look at the statistics about the gender of famous leaders we find more men than women, just to give some examples: Bill Gates, Elon Musk or Donald Trump. But is it true? What if a bias is embedded in
such
 data? It is undoubtedly true that the patriarchal society has given more space to men.
However
, Giovanna d'Arco, Madre Teresa di Calcutta and Rosa Luxemburg are some of the female figures
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 have demonstrated that
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, critical approach and mindfulness are not natural at all. These three leading figures have shown that patience, learning by doing and perseverance are abilities that can be nurtured, and supported by a community around you. In conclusion,
although
 for many leadership is an innate gift, I side with the opinion of those who believe that it is a skill that can be acquired through the trust of
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Structure your paragraphs more clearly, making sure each one has a clear main idea and that ideas are linked smoothly.
coherence cohesion
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You provided relevant examples like Bill Gates, Elon Musk, and figures like Mother Teresa which make your argument relatable.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate
  • charisma
  • decisiveness
  • confidence
  • personality
  • genetic
  • acquired
  • education
  • experience
  • practice
  • training programs
  • mentorship
  • proponents
  • hard work
  • continuous learning
  • head start
  • dedication
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