The graph shows the popularity of Pop Music in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the popularity of Pop Music in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presents the difference in the
number
of
elephants
in the southeast
countries
in 1994 and 2007. In overview, the research displays
individuals
of
elephants
decreased in many
countries
in 1994 compared to 2007, except for Cambodia where there is a slight increase in the
number
of
elephants
. In 1994, India had the highest
number
of
elephants
with almost 10000 amongst other
countries
.
However
, the figure plunged by about 2000
individuals
in 2007.
Besides
, Myanmar, the second-largest habitat of
elephants
, originally had 5200
elephants
;
likewise
, the
number
fell to 4600
individuals
. In the case of Thailand, the
number
of
elephants
took up the third place with approximately 3800
elephants
, and following that they reduced rapidly to about 1000.
Additionally
, there are 3000
elephants
in
Malaysia
, almost the same
number
as in Sri Lanka,
whereas
the variation in the
number
in
Malaysia
is larger than in Sri Lanka. In 2004, there was a notable decline of 7000
individuals
in
Malaysia
while
there were little changes in Sri Lanka with 7000. In general, the changes in the
number
of
elephants
in some
countries
from 1994 to 2007 were not pronounced, apart from three
countries
,
that is
"India, Thailand, and
Malaysia
".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, elephants, countries, individuals, malaysia with synonyms.
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