You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
diagram illustrates the carbonated drinks process
. The manufacturing process Change to a genitive case
the process of the carbonated drink
obtaines
five stages of making carbonated Correct your spelling
obtained
obtains
water
.
Overall
, as
it can be seen that, the making of carbonated Correct word choice
apply
water
is starting
from Wrong verb form
starts
cleaning
step and Correct article usage
the cleaning
end
Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
to
Change preposition
in
packaging
Correct article usage
the packaging
stap
.
Looking at the diagram in more Correct your spelling
stage
details
, Fix the agreement mistake
detail
to begin
with
raw Add a comma
with,
water
is filtering through water
softener. Add an article
a water
the water
This
water
softener contains chemicals for best
cleaning. After that, filtered Correct article usage
the best
water
is pumping
to electric heaters and Wrong verb form
pumped
deliver
to Wrong verb form
delivered
next
Correct article usage
the next
stage
. The second stage
is heating evaporation and carbonation which is cooling the heating water
through cooling
pipe and mixing Add an article
the cooling
a cooling
with
carbon Correct pronoun usage
it with
dioxode
. Correct your spelling
dioxide
Furthermore
, carbonated water
is mixing
repeatedly in the tank with more colouring materials, syrup and Wrong verb form
mixed
falvour
. The fourth Correct your spelling
flavour
stage
is filtering and filling the carbonated water
in bottels
and cons. The final Correct your spelling
bottles
stage
in this
process is when packaging and send
carbonated Wrong verb form
sending
water
products to supermarket
. So, customers can be Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
drinked
after getting a good cooling.Correct your spelling
drunk
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