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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs show
production
 levels of three main fuels in the United Kingdom, consisting
petroleum
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of petroleum
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, coal and natural gas. The data was preserved from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
,
Petroleum
have
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has
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 the highest
production
 among all.
Although
 have
fluctuation
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a fluctuation
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 trend, the
production
 of
petroleum
 is still dominating. The
production
on
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of
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 natural gas was inclined
in
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from
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 1981 to 2000. On
other
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the other
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 hand,
coal's
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coal
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production
had
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declined through those years.
According to
 the ghraphs,
petroleum
production
 is inclining
in
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from
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 1981 to 1984, but it was stagnant until 1987. After that period, the
production
 was
decrease
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decreased
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 until 1990.
However
, it can be seen that it slowly
increase
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increased
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 until 2000. On
other
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the other
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 hand, natural
gas'
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gas
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production
 was stagnant from 1981 to 1990, but it significantly
increases
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increased
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 after that, and
reach
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reached
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to
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apply
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100 Energy Units in 2000.
Nonetheless
,
the
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coal's
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coal
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production
 was stagnant from 1981 to 1983
,
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 and
decreases
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decreased
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 sharply in 1984. Despite the
production
was increase
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increased
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 until 1986, it
continues
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continued
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 to decline to below 40 Energy Units in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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