The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
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The diagram below provides how a biofuel called
ethanol
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is produced.
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, it is a cyclic process which contains 8 steps, starting with gaining energy from the sun and finishing with emitting
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carbon dioxide into the air. First of all, for growing
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plants and trees, they gain energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide to themselves. After growing to normal size, people will harvest them with their combines and
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, collected plants will be pre-processed by machines. In the next part of the process,
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cellulose will be taken into
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.
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, scientists will make sugars and for
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step of making
ethanol
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microbes will be added
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sugars
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the sugars
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how
ethanol
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is produced
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, as a main part of the biofuel,
ethanol
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is used for
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of transports
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as planes, trucks and cars.
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,
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driving these vehicles, carbon dioxide is reproduced and
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cyclic process
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again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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