The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides information about the proportion of
the
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apply
students
who learn
to play four different instruments in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Wrong verb form
learned
It is clear that
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
children
learning to play violin
is showing a decreasing trend Change the article
the violin
while
others are increasing in
every 5 years.
First of all, we can see that most of the Change preposition
apply
students
learned piano during the period and it shows an increasing tendency. In 2005, slightly more than 10% of the students
learned how to play piano. The figure rose to 20% in 2010 and doubled in 2015 as it is a
main musical Correct article usage
the
instrument
to play when children
start music. It was followed by guitar where 10% of school children
tried to learn. The rate increased to approximately 18% in 2010 and peaked at the rate of 40% in 2015 indicating that guitar became a popular instrument
.
Drum
was the least popular Add an article
The drum
instrument
children
pursued to learn. The figure remained stable in 2005 and 2010 at 5%. Then
it slightly increased to almost 10% in 2015. Violin
was the only Add an article
The violin
instrument
that showed a decreasing trend. About 9% of students
chose to play violin
in 2005 and Change the article
the violin
then
it decreased to 5% in ten years.Submitted by wjddbs2206 on
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