The chart below shows what Engineering graduates from a London university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Engineers in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Engineering graduates from a London university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Engineers in work after five years.
The pie chart below shows what Engineering
graduates
from a London University did after undergraduate degree courses,
while
the table illustrates the incomes of Engineers in work after five years.
Overall
,
according to
the pie chart, the overwhelming majority of Engineering students were employed full-time.
Additionally
,
according to
the table, the highest salaries of Engineering
graduates
came from freelance and government. Regarding the pie chart, just over half of the
graduates
worked full-time and 15% of these
graduates
had a part-time job.
By contrast
, a small minority of
graduates
did not have a job and another 8% of students did not disclose their employment status.
Furthermore
, a very tiny portion of these students had postgraduate study and part-time work, including part-time study. As can be seen from the table, the highest salaries came to the workers in freelance and government, who had an income of £100,000, 40% and 50%, respectively.
By contrast
, most of the
graduates
that worked in private had salaries of about £50,000-£74,999, 35%.
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