The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables present data on the
sales
of Fairtrade-labeled
coffee
and bananas in five European countries between 1999 and 2004.
Overall
,
sales
of both products experienced an upward trend, with
Switzerland
and the
UK
consistently having the highest
sales
figures. In 1999,
Switzerland
had the highest
coffee
sales
, reaching approximately 3
million
euros
,
while
Denmark's
sales
were slightly over half that amount. The remaining countries had average
coffee
sales
between 1.5 and 0.8
million
euros
. By 2004, the
UK
had dramatically increased its
coffee
sales
to over 20
million
euros
, surpassing
Switzerland
.
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden saw modest increases in
coffee
sales
, ranging from 1.7 to 6
million
euros
. For bananas, the
UK
had the highest
sales
in both 1999 and 2004. In 1999,
UK
banana
sales
were around 15
million
euros
,
while
other countries'
sales
ranged from 0.6 to 2
million
euros
. By 2004,
UK
banana
sales
had risen significantly to 47
million
euros
.
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden
also
experienced gradual increases in banana
sales
, with figures ranging from 4
million
euros
.
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