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The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables present data on the
sales
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 of Fairtrade-labeled
coffee
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 and bananas in five European countries between 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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,
sales
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 of both products experienced an upward trend, with
Switzerland
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 and the
UK
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 consistently having the highest
sales
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 figures. In 1999,
Switzerland
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 had the highest
coffee
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sales
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, reaching approximately 3
million
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euros
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,
while
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 Denmark's
sales
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 were slightly over half that amount. The remaining countries had average
coffee
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sales
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 between 1.5 and 0.8
million
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euros
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. By 2004, the
UK
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 had dramatically increased its
coffee
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sales
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 to over 20
million
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euros
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, surpassing
Switzerland
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.
Switzerland
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, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden saw modest increases in
coffee
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sales
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, ranging from 1.7 to 6
million
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euros
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. For bananas, the
UK
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 had the highest
sales
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 in both 1999 and 2004. In 1999,
UK
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 banana
sales
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 were around 15
million
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euros
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,
while
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 other countries'
sales
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 ranged from 0.6 to 2
million
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euros
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. By 2004,
UK
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 banana
sales
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 had risen significantly to 47
million
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euros
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.
Switzerland
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, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden
also
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 experienced gradual increases in banana
sales
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, with figures ranging from 4
million
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euros
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, switzerland, uk, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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