A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem.
Hi Irwan,
I am writing
this
letter to give you advices
about a problem at work that I had in the past.
First of all, Change the wording
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pieces of advice
bits of advice
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, sometime
we don’t realize the mistake.
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a faulty
be happened
is caused by no constructor for the class that you want to assign.
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with, I had the same issue on
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Moreover
, error
logs didn’t show me the root of the problem. It confused me; sinceCorrect article usage
the error
,
I had already checked the flow of the logic; yet, nothing was wrong.
From my experience, you can try to put some logging on Java codes; Remove the comma
apply
therefore
, you can check every value on your codes by logging it manually every line. On the other hand
, there is a debugger which
built into a framework to detect the root cause easily.
I hope the best for you, I am waiting for your reply
Yours Sincerely,
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coherence cohesion
Try to merge sentences for smoother transitions between ideas, and ensure clarity by reducing repetitive phrases.
task achievement
Including more detail or examples to explain solutions could strengthen your response.
task achievement
Improve the complexity and accuracy of your vocabulary and grammar to better match the desired writing tone for the IELTS.
greeting and closing
Good job on using a structure that includes a greeting, body, and closing.
complete response
You have successfully addressed your friend's problem, explained your experience, and suggested potential solutions.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.