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The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts illustrate information about the differences in the
number
 of
hours
 that students
study
 each
day
 at five different universities.
Overall
, the
number
 of
hours
 in which students
study
 is generally more on
weekdays
 than on
weekends
 in all the different universities.
However
, in
University
 A the difference in the
hours
 is small because is around 9.8
hours
 per
day
 during the
weekdays
 and 9
hours
 per
day
 during the weekend;
otherwise
, there are much bigger differences in
University
 D
fewerwhere
Correct your spelling
there
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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 9.6
hours
 per
day
 on
weekdays
 and 5.6 at
weekends
. As it is shown in the charts the
university
 with the highest
number
 of
hours
 per
day
 during the
weekdays
 is
university
Capitalize word
University
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 C with around 10.6,
on the
contrary
Add the comma(s)
contrary,
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University
 D is the one with the least
number
 of
hours
 of
study
 on the
weekdays
 with around 9.6
hours
. At the
weekends
instead
 is
university
 A with 9
hours
 per
day
 the one with the more of
hours
 of
study
 per
day
 and it is again
university
 D the one with the least
number
 of
hours
 of
study
 at the
weekends
 with 5.6
hours
 per
day
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, study, day, weekdays, weekends, university with synonyms.
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