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The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts illustrate information about the differences in the
number
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 of
hours
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 that students
study
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 each
day
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 at five different universities.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of
hours
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 in which students
study
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 is generally more on
weekdays
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 than on
weekends
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 in all the different universities.
However
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, in
University
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 A the difference in the
hours
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 is small because is around 9.8
hours
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 per
day
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 during the
weekdays
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 and 9
hours
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 per
day
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 during the weekend;
otherwise
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, there are much bigger differences in
University
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 D
fewerwhere
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there
is
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are
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 9.6
hours
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 per
day
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 on
weekdays
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 and 5.6 at
weekends
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. As it is shown in the charts the
university
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 with the highest
number
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 of
hours
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 per
day
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 during the
weekdays
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 is
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university
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University
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 C with around 10.6,
on the
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contrary
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contrary,
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University
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 D is the one with the least
number
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 of
hours
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 of
study
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 on the
weekdays
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 with around 9.6
hours
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. At the
weekends
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instead
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 is
university
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 A with 9
hours
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 per
day
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 the one with the more of
hours
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 of
study
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 per
day
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 and it is again
university
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 D the one with the least
number
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 of
hours
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 of
study
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 at the
weekends
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 with 5.6
hours
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 per
day
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, study, day, weekdays, weekends, university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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