Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt, that

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environmental issues are crucial;

however

, the part of society

argue

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argues

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that the extinction of particular

species

is the most important problem. I do not agree with

this

statment

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statement

and suggest, that global warming has more impact on the

planet

.

To begin

with, the main argument of protectors

all

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species

of plants and animals is that their loss may lead to breaking

food

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the food

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chain.

For instance

, in

last

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the last

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centure

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century

, in China, people killed all sparrows and the vanishing of

such

birds led to

flourishing

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the flourishing

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of insects.

In other words

, all

species

not only work as food for big predators but

also

control other smaller

species

. Alternatively, if

food

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chain was destroyed, some insects or unwilling animals or plants would cover the

planet

. So, that negative scenario will be disruptive for all humanity.

On the other hand

, from my point of view, global warming is the most

seriose

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serious

problem

of

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environment

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the environment

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.

This

is because

,

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the

tempreture

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temperature

rasing

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rising

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increases the

posibbility

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possibility

of storms and droughts

in

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on

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the Earth. To illustrate

this

, scientists report that as

the

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consequence of global

warming

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warming,

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the number of fires and draughts in the US and Europe have soared in recent years.

In contrast

, if the rising of average temperature on the

planet

was not

essenscial

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essential

, governments would not spend billions

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of dollar

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dollar

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on solving

outcome

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of the issue. In conclusion, I agree, that protection of all

species

is important because the loss of them may destroy many animals and

plant

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plants

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.

However

, the most pivotal issue is

global

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a global

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warning

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warming

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in light of the

dengerouse

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dangerous

effects on the

planet

, which makes people

valnurable

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vulnerable

.