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the graph shows the income of four cafes in New york over last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant.

the graph shows the income of four cafes in New york over last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant.
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The illustration depicts the annual
income
 of four different cafes in New York for the previous year.
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagram that the
income
 of
three
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the three
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 cafes except the tea room has increased.
Eventhough
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Even though
 the tea room had
highest
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the highest
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income
 during
the
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apply
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most months of the year, it seems to
has
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have
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 dropped dramatically in November and December.
Sales
 of Wifi-Cafe and
the
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Cafe Cool increased significantly
at the end
 of the year
where
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whereas
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opposite
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the opposite
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 happened to the tea room profits.
However
 the Internet Express had
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a graduall
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graduall
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gradually
gradual
 fall
at
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in
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 the first half, but
sales
 seemed to
pick-up
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pick up
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 afterwards indicating a gradual increase over the rest six months. Wifi-Cafe has been able to record the highest
sales
 with an
income
 of $190,000
while
 the lowest
sales
 were from
cafe cool
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Cafe Cool
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 with an
income
 of around 10,000 dollars. Profits of Cafe Cool always fluctuated wildly but the trend seemed to be upwards.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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