Many people nowadays are concerned about the level of air pollution created by the number of people using air travel. They suggest it may be safer for people to use alternative forms of transportation such as road transport. To what extent do you agree that travel by road may be the safer option?

The level of

air

pollution

has increased over time.

As a result

, some

people

argue that

air

transportation has a big impact on it,

also

it is riskier than roads.

However

, I disagree with

this

view, as

air

transportation is not the main cause of

pollution

.

Moreover

,

percentage

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the percentage

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of

road

accidents

is more frequent than airs, meaning that

road

transportation is riskier than airs. The main reason why

people

feel that the

air

is contaminated is because the level of

pollution

is higher than the environment can handle.

Trees

play a crucial role in the filtering process, as

people

often call them the

lung

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lungs

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of the world.

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Additionally

, the distance of

air

travel is far enough, meaning that the waste is

spreaded

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spread

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.

Thus

, the

trees

can decompose

it

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apply

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before making the

pollution

worse.

For instance

,

while

people

were

traveling

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travelling

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from Indonesia to Japan,

plane

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planes

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generated waste along the trip.

This

waste can be purified by the

trees

from the countries passed, as the

number

of

trees

is increased

along with

the distance. The main reason for the bad quality of

air

is the factories in the cities. Especially when the

number

of factories is too many compared with the size of the cities. Regarding

the

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safety, given the

number

of

road

and

air

accidents

, the

percentage

of

the

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roads is higher than the

airs

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air

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. The

percentage

is measured by dividing the

number

of

accidents

with

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by

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the total

number

of trips. Having

the

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a

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higher

percentage

means that it is more likely to happen.

For example

, recorded bus

accidents

in 2014

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were

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100 from 1000 trips and plane

accidents

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were

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5 from 100 trips.

People

can draw a conclusion using these data that

road

accidents

have

10

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a 10

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% possibility and

air

accidents

have

5

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a 5

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% possibility.

Therefore

, planes are safer than buses. In conclusion,

air

travel is not the main reason

of

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for

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pollution

as long as

the

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people

keep the

number

of

trees

.

Also

, after analyzing the accident data we can conclude that

air

travel is safer than roads.