The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004

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of Asian

elephants

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in nine different countries: Vietnam, India, Malaysia,

srilanka

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Sri Lanka

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, Cambodia, Laos, Myanmar, Thailand, and

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in two separate years:1997 and 2004. The

number

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of

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in Vietnam, Sri Lanka and Myanmar fell slightly from 1200,3000, and 5300 in 1997 to 1100,2800, and 4800 in 2004 respectively.

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the

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of

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in India, which was the highest

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gradually from 9900 to 7500.

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there was a sharp decrease for Malaysia and Thailand from 3000 and 3800 to 1100 and 1300 in the same order. For

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, the

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fell by half from 1000 to 500.With regard to Laos, the

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of

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didn’t change and stood at 1100, and Cambodia was the only country which had a slight rise.

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seen that except

Cambodia

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for Cambodia

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, there was a continuous fall in the

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of

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for all other countries.