The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph displays data about the percentages of
people
who buy and drink hot drinks in Australia's main 5 cities over one month. The X-axis shows the five different cities while
the percentage of people
is presented on the y-axis.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the percentage of people
who bought instant coffee in Australia is higher than the number of people
who bought fresh coffee. Moreover
, the percentage of people
who like fresh coffee in Brisban is the lowest while
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