You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2019 & 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant write at least 150 words
On the
pie chart display Change preposition
The
give
an illustration of the comparison Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
retail
Change preposition
of retail
sectors
which are electronics appliances, groceries, home and kitchen, and clothing at
two years (2019 & 2020) in Canada.
Change preposition
for
Overall
, the online sales
for the four sectors
changed significantly. While
in 2020 groceries and electronic appliances increased, but the other two sectors
fell.
In 2019, the chart of online sales
of groceries was 14%, but rose in 2020 was 22%. And the
Correct word choice
The
percentage
for online sales
of electronics same
went up by 26% from 19% in 2019.
Correct word choice
apply
In contrast
, the other sector decreased percentage
of the online sales
. The most dramatic decreased
in the home and kitchen retail stores, Replace the word
decrease
percentage
from the chart. Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
While
this
figure was just over 25% of the total online sales
from these four sectors
in 2019, it fell to just 11% in 2020. In percentage
there Add a comma
percentage,
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
also
Correct article usage
a decresed
decresed
in Correct your spelling
decrease
clothing
sector, from 38% in 2019 to 22% in 2020.Add an article
the clothing
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors, sales, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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