The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting  the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graph presents the amount of electricity produced and
usage
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in 2014, comparing ten
countries
, which are
China
, The United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and The Republic of Korea. The data is measured in
billion
kWh
. It can be clearly seen that
China
was
on
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the highest position
that
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followed by the US for both electricity production and consumption. Meanwhile, the remaining
countries
were far behind them.
However
, all of the
countries
had a similar number between their production and their consumption.
China
had a higher number of production than
the
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consumption, which
5,398
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and 5,322 respectively.
Nevertheless
, the United States was only lower roughly around 1,000
billion
kWh
from
China
. There were several
countries
which had a range of amount for both
aspect
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from 600 to 400
billion
kWh
, they were France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea, from higher to lower. Meanwhile, Russia, Japan, India, and Canada were still above 600
billion
kWh
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, china, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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