The graph below shows the comparison on birthrates in Sweden, China, Australia, and Vietnam per thousands. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The graph below shows the comparison on birthrates in Sweden, China, Australia, and Vietnam per thousands. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The graph shows data on birthrates in 4 selected nations: Sweden, China, Australia and
Vietnam
in
35-year
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a 35-year
the 35-year
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period.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a downward trend in the
birthrates
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birth rates
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of all four countries,
while
a sharp change was witnessed in the statistics of
Vietnam
and China during the selected period.
According to
the line graph, around 17
thousand
babies were born in 1970 in
Australian
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Australia
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before witnessing a moderate decline to exactly 15
thousand
by 1980 and remaining the same
another
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for another
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5 years. Eventually,
this
figure experienced a
modieval
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medieval
decrease to about 13
thousand
by 2005.
Likewise
, a fluctuation was registered in the figure for Sweden with
intially
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initially
above 10
thousand
babies which reached its peak of 14
thousand
by 2000 before falling to 10
thousand
by 2005. In terms of the remaining countries, both
Vietnam
and China observed a similar pattern with the
intial
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initial
figures of 25
thousand
in two nations.
Vietnam
saw a gradual decline
by
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8
thousand
, making it the country with the highest
birthrate
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birth rate
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of all.
On the other hand
, China’s figure hit the lowest point of around 1
thousand
during the selected period.
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