The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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In the sketch, there can be seen the changes which are implemented within three years, in the museum. As far as some places have remained unchanged, some modifications are implemented to increase the buildings' portion by taking the garden's share. It can be seen from the general view, that the Entrance, Lobby, Ticket desk, Ocean hall, and Dinosaur hall have remained in the same situation since 2010,

while

the place for Mammals has been replaced by the Ice Age exhibition and Insects area. It has been already shifted to the newly built place on the right side of the Entrance,

whereas

Human origin display, Shop, and Cafe have

also

been added there.

Overall

, the modification seems to have decreased the available open green area and used it to create new buildings by increasing the total covered area by almost one-third.

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